2011년 1월 22일 토요일

Free Verse

True Relationship

There was a time when I felt so hard
It was only you who truly take care of me
Even though the evil Satan tested me and gave me pain,
Thanks for giving me hope in my life, and
Held me when I had hardship like a light
I really found the road in my darkness
I really appreciate for your help
I don’t know I can I pay back to you
There’s no word to express my feeling now
So I will just dedicate you this poem

댓글 1개:

  1. A. There is not really a form to follow, but it does have the correct number of lines.
    B. It does follow the theme of relationships, but what kind it is is unclear.

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